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Comment on Fate Zero Episode 20 by SPIRAL (@CSWSPIRAL)

SPIRAL (@CSWSPIRAL) — Thu, 31 May 2012 07:05:35 +0000

Iris does die. #seewhatyoudidthere

Comment on Fate Zero Episode 20 by Poro

Poro — Tue, 29 May 2012 01:38:26 +0000

everyone also loves having those open eyes to have the same color through out. Who needs an iris anyways psh…

Comment on A Certain Anime-Oriented College Essay by SPIRAL (@CSWSPIRAL)

SPIRAL (@CSWSPIRAL) — Tue, 29 May 2012 01:01:09 +0000

I actually want to know if this essay works. If it does, I’ll buy you a drink anytime you come to chicago/Korea

Comment on Fate Zero Episode 20 by SPIRAL (@CSWSPIRAL)

SPIRAL (@CSWSPIRAL) — Tue, 29 May 2012 00:58:15 +0000

Either way, he killed basically every one he knew as family.

Everyone in this show loves killing each other, and crying with open eyes after it.

Comment on A Certain Anime-Oriented College Essay by Nuu (aka FaS)

Nuu (aka FaS) — Mon, 28 May 2012 17:06:57 +0000

Get your anime on! Fuck them haters lol. I’d rather get an A writing what I want, then Struggling on something boring & getting an A. So shake n bake!!!! What grade you get?

Comment on A Certain Anime-Oriented College Essay by shumbapumba

shumbapumba — Mon, 28 May 2012 09:43:03 +0000

Great tone. Simple and nostalgic. Effective writing. A+ \(*.*)/

Comment on Deadman Wonderland -1… thought you had bad luck? by A pretty godamned cool guy

A pretty godamned cool guy — Sun, 27 May 2012 09:41:23 +0000

Just watched the 1st and 2nd episode. if you can prove to me this isn’t exactly like superjail i will personally kiss your ass!!!11!!!111!!!!!!!111!!!!

Comment on A Certain Anime-Oriented College Essay by Harry

Harry — Sat, 26 May 2012 17:29:57 +0000

It’s not an official format as such, but at least in New South Wales (not completely sure about the other states) if you are writing an essay on a text, they heavily recommend that you don’t use subjective language. You are supposed to refer to what you think as what you think the bare minimum of times. In my university tutorial (face-time with people higher up in the hierarchy) I have been told not to introduce my thesis as me arguing the point, but as “this essay will argue [something]“. It frustrates me enormously, because I think it weakens the idea that whenever you analyse a text, the analysis will be subjective. It is important to keep that truth clear and prominent in analysing events, texts or anything in life. I feel that your essay, though on a subject that does encourage its informality, also embraces and is thus strengthened by its subjectivity. This makes it engaging, interesting, and in my opinion more honest.

Comment on A Certain Anime-Oriented College Essay by Poro

Poro — Sat, 26 May 2012 03:17:22 +0000

I don’t know what difference there is between American and Australian essay writing. I looked up “Australian essay format” on google and found the University of Southern Queensland’s suggestion for essay format which supports a essay format which is standard in all American essay writing. If you look at my essay carefully, you’ll find I have a similar although heavily modified format. I start broad from my reading habits and childhood and zoom into Honey and Clover along with my experience with it. Then, I zoom back out. I’ve never been criticized for writing in a personal or subjective manner unless I have 1. deviated from the topic. or 2. didn’t express my emotions/opinions properly. I am really glad my essay managed to communicate what I wanted to say in an enjoyable manner. You can’t imagine how many times I’ve pored over that essay perusing it over and over. If you keep trying, I’m sure you’ll be able to do the same as I have done to you. Good luck. – Poro

Comment on A Certain Anime-Oriented College Essay by Harry

Harry — Sat, 26 May 2012 02:57:34 +0000

It is crazy and heartbreaking how different essay writing is in America compared to Australia.

I want to write an essay where I don’t get criticised for writing in a way that acknowledges what I am writing is personal and subjective.

Also, thank you for the essay. It was an enjoyable and heartfelt read.