was a total dumbfuck. No really. I am here to show you some shortcuts this author took. Some really pathetic ones may I say. I bet I could write a better story. Oh wait, I am! So here I am bashing Gosick. A good idea really. But you need a brilliant writer behind a good idea.
Women wore shorter dresses after World War 1. Not all that short, but at least they wouldn’t have extremely long hair that is hard to keep. Where does Victorique bath and eat anyways? Where does she sleep? Does she just mop over the floor like in Episode 2? Who fucking knows? We need Kujo to explain that all too us. Grevil’s hair cut isn’t even legal. No way in hell would a post-WWI man be caught dead with a Youtube-Era-haircut. Not even Grevil. Otherwise, he would have let Victorique free and maybe even have incest with her. That reminds me of a certain Immortal Cockroach and Colonel from an overrated Gundam series. Now I am getting off track.
Lack of cake makes me sad. We need more cake in this anime. You know what every anime besides Yumeiro Patisstre and K-ON! needs? More cake. Wait. Why is Victorique in a drab black dress anyways. If we aren’t even going to play by the rules in the first place, might as well dress her in white.
Victorique needs to show more reasoning. I tried ruining my pulse by squeezing my pillow really hard. Didn’t work. No I didn’t use my thumb. I took First Aid in Health Class last year. Also, can’t you hear the ripping noise of the wallpaper? Why does the culprit do all that shit. Wait, why do the people pay the culprit who now have a strong urge for revenge? Better yet, why don’t see more Victorique in white?
The Avril Arc.
WTF!! You don’t explain squat. You guess and just happen to be right. You’re acting like a psychologist rather than a deductive detective. My god this arc is a mess. This time, the author doesn’t even bother getting his/her facts straight. You remember that stamp that Avril Bradley got from her grandfather? Read this:
The Penny Black is not a rare stamp. The total print run was 286,700 sheets with 68,808,000 stamps  and a substantial number of these have survived, largely because envelopes were not normally used: letters in the form of letter sheets were folded and sealed, with the stamp and the address on the obverse. If the letter was kept, the stamp survived. However, the only known complete sheets of the Penny Black are owned by the British Postal Museum.
The Penny Black is readily available on the collectors’ market; a used stamp in poor condition can cost as little as £10 ($20); in 2000, a used stamp in fine condition cost about £110, an unused example about £1,600, with prices steadily rising. By contrast, a used Penny Red was £1.50.
This is from Wikipedia. This Penny Black is nothing special. Hell, no stamp is worth enough to be an adventurer’s fortune. He was better off buying a golden medallion than this. Wow Avril got jipped off. So yeah, this fanfix for the Avril Arc is going rather sluggishly. This isn’t a short story kind of mystery. This is a legitamate mystery with multiple factors and nuances to take care of. Btw, I would like it if you would comment on my fanfictions more. What would you like to see in my fanficitons and all that crap. Wolverine first impressions coming up next time.